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Hi Kanishka and Clarice,We enjoyed reading and listening to your writing. We think you could add some similes to paint a picture in your readers minds.Keep up the fantastic work,Morris Class
Thank you for the awesome feedback Morris Class.
HI I love your work Kanishka it is really good and the book in to the forest it is a grate story.I think you have been working hard.Maybe you could start at the beginning of the story. from Faisal
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment.