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Hi Joseph C,Your story is so amazing,i loved that your sentences had adjectives and phrases.Would you ever want to be an Author?By Taylor
Kia ora joseph i like the bit when batman was one of his dreams.From your specialist zaria
Hello Joseph CI loved your story bird. It made me laugh and your sentences were phenomenal. I liked the part were you said there was an alien from the planet Coffe, and your sentences were very detailed. Well done Joseph CBy Gargee
Hi Joseph C,I love your story even when the horse dreamed about being a robot that was funny but it was cool.From Jayzel
That cool
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Hi Joseph C,
ReplyDeleteYour story is so amazing,i loved that your sentences had adjectives and phrases.
Would you ever want to be an Author?
By Taylor
Kia ora joseph
ReplyDeletei like the bit when batman was one of his dreams.
From your specialist zaria
Hello Joseph C
ReplyDeleteI loved your story bird. It made me laugh and your sentences were phenomenal. I liked the part were you said there was an alien from the planet Coffe, and your sentences were very detailed. Well done Joseph C
By Gargee
Hi Joseph C,
ReplyDeleteI love your story even when the horse dreamed about being a robot that was funny but it was cool.
From Jayzel
That cool
ReplyDelete