Friday 24 July 2015

Creative Writing using Storybird by Joseph Chavez

5 comments:

  1. Hi Joseph C,
    Your story is so amazing,i loved that your sentences had adjectives and phrases.
    Would you ever want to be an Author?

    By Taylor

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  2. Kia ora joseph

    i like the bit when batman was one of his dreams.

    From your specialist zaria

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  3. Hello Joseph C
    I loved your story bird. It made me laugh and your sentences were phenomenal. I liked the part were you said there was an alien from the planet Coffe, and your sentences were very detailed. Well done Joseph C

    By Gargee

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  4. Hi Joseph C,
    I love your story even when the horse dreamed about being a robot that was funny but it was cool.

    From Jayzel

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